Hero Generation: RPG

Feedback wrote:OOC: Sebastian13 please write that your a Plumber on Occupation. Tsaklas, why do you have Shocksquatch ? Your a Gimilinopethicticus so you don't need Shocksquatch change to any alien and write Playlist 2 like Prem122. I am telling this to everyone Sebastian, Tsaklas, Tammar, verbomanic, ds78

OOC: Sebastian and Tsaklas you have joined Plumbers Academy so you are Plumber and write that your Occupation is Plumber. Write Playlist 2 for new aliens only.

Prem wrote:

Sebastian13 wrote:OOC: I initially said only Omnitrixes from the series. But if you want to make one for yourselves, be sure to clearly state what it does, I don't want anyone to make up aliens or powers on the way so that things would be fair. A bit busy these days so I can't join the story right now.

OOC: I will write the story but why are only I and Tsaklas writing the story, Tammar and verbomanic too should write the story

You have a point, but they may don't have time to join us.

IC: As I escaped with ds78 before that I had scan those alien's DNA, Nosedeenian, Vaxasaurian, Petrosapian. I too scanned ds78's DNA and he too scanned my aliens DNA (off-screen so more DNA than 3). I said to ds78 I have predators DNA too, so I can defeat him but not much only just some. To be Continued...

ic Okay then albedo lets go kill everybody after I scan the predators then.
I approach the heroes and turn into mutant crabdozer.

OOC do I still get mutant feature?

ds78 wrote:ic Okay then albedo lets go kill everybody after I scan the predators then.
I approach the heroes and turn into mutant crabdozer.

OOC do I still get mutant feature?

OOC: Yes you have mutant feature but Preators why your Omnitrix is Mutinitrix ? Your Omnitrix cannot scan Predator's DNA.

Prem wrote:

ds78 wrote:ic Okay then albedo lets go kill everybody after I scan the predators then.
I approach the heroes and turn into mutant crabdozer.

OOC do I still get mutant feature?

OOC: Yes you have mutant feature but Preators why your Omnitrix is Mutinitrix ? Your Omnitrix cannot scan Predator's DNA.

OOC: But I have modify the Mutinitrix and it is nice name. My Omnitrix's name is Negatrix and your Duotrix.

OOc prem my trix can scan any unsentient DNA as well meaning I can scan predators.
Ic as mutant crabdozer I charge and hit all heroes

ds78 wrote:OOc prem my trix can scan any unsentient DNA as well meaning I can scan predators.
Ic as mutant crabdozer I charge and hit all heroes

OOCPlease write properly for example:( OOC: Prem my Omnitrix can scan any Unsentient DNA as well meaning I can scan predators. IC: As Mutant Crabdozer I charge and hit all heroes.)

IC: We all changed back to normal. We thought that we should battle in our normal form. I said "We can defeat it easily it's just a Crabdozer..Hey, wait there is Mutinitrix on his chest !. Aahhhh ds78, let me think you were in jail than how do you got your Mutinitrix. Aah.. I am confused ! Let it be I don't need any alien to defeat you ", he replies,"I too", changed back to normal form. We all start fighting but that time I saw Albedo I said,"Who are you, a Conductoid ? To be continued.............................................

OOC: So I came back from inactivity. Can someone please explain to me what's going on?

IC Ah but I am not just a crabdozer. I am a Mutant crabdozer. Suddenly I touch the ground and earthquakes knock all of you over after I surprise turn back into him

Sorry guys I am going to my village, so I cannot write the sorry but I will return.

IC I run towards the main plumber energy core turn into feedback and destroy it. It reverts all our trixs so nobody has ultimates or mutants anymore.I unlock spitter dna and spit a stream of acid to kill all of you

OOC: Hey by chance I got net on my mobile so I can come.

IC: We all have scan our all DNA. I as XLR8 go to catch ds78 and Tsaklas too was with me as XLR8, others were fighting Albedo. ds78 spit acid on us but we turn into Cannonbolt. To be continued................

OOC: Hey by chance I got net on my mobile so I can come.

IC: We all have scan our all DNA. I as XLR8 go to catch ds78 and Tsaklas too was with me as XLR8, others were fighting Albedo. ds78 spit acid on us but we turn into Cannonbolt. To be continued................

OCC: Wait, who are we ?

Tsaklas wrote:OCC: Wait, who are we ?

We are Cannonbolt.

Prem wrote:

Tsaklas wrote:OCC: Wait, who are we ?

We are XLR8.

I mean, me and you, or somebody else too ?

Tsaklas wrote:

Prem wrote:

Tsaklas wrote:OCC: Wait, who are we ?

We are XLR8.

I mean, me and you, or somebody else too ?

OOC: I have edited it, reload and see. And write the story. You should write the aliens at the playlist which we have but not you, as I told you that we have scan all of you, me, Sebastian, verbomanic, Tammar.

OCC : OK then!

IC : ds78 gets mad and starts chasing us.

IC I turn into diamondhead trap all of you and smash them on you. You are all uncouncious. I turn into wildvine and envelop you in posion.

OOC: Can someone please explain to me what's happening so I can continue?

Tammar wrote:OOC: Can someone please explain to me what's happening so I can continue?

Please read from 5th page or from where you have not read.

IC: The same time a dark lighting started and we went to any other dimension. I was alone, Tsaklas was alone, Sebastian was alone and Tammar, Skittles, Albedo, ds78, too. A villain named Mandarin- a lion and leopard like creature. I was not knowing that my friends and enimies are in this dimension, so I said to Mandarin, "Hey where are my friends what you have did to them ? He replied that, "They are ok, I have challenged you, your friends and enimies". I accepted the challenge and a Dark Kineceleran - he was more danger than a Mutant Kineceleran. Everyone got this challenge. Mandarin said, "Defeat these Dark Kinceleran with any of your fast alien".I said,"Oh you mean a Dark XLR8 . I turned into XLR8. He was more faster than me. He went front of me but now I used my full speed and won the race. Now a Dark Tetramand come front of me, this is a power match. I shout,"Come on Way Big", accidentally I changed into Rath.

OOC: Please don't complete my story write that how you defeat the Kinceleran and Tetramand. I will write further.

IC: I (as Rath) said,"HEY DUOTRIX CANNOT YOU GIVE ME THE RIGHT ALIEN ? AND YOU DARK FOUR ARMS, I AM GONNA CRUSH AND SMASH YOU. KARRR..........". I started fighting with Tetramand. He was more stronger than me. I went more crazy and angry. I started punching and kicking him, he was defeated. Now a Dark Cerebrocustacean, it was a IQ match. I turned into Grey Matter and started asking question that tell the names of special aliens from Andromeda galaxy ? he answered, Orishan, Talpaedan, Geochelone Aerio, Prypiatosian- B, Amperi. "Who is predator of Galvans ?", he asked. I said,"Omnivoracious". I asked "Which species is smart ?", he answered Cerebrocustacean. He was defeated because he gave a incomplete answer the answer was Cerebrocustacean and Galvan. Now a Dark Conductoid. There was electricity flying everywhere he absorbs it and attacks me. I change into Chromastone and absorb it and fire he too absorbed it and other electricity and fired that time change to Diamondhead give back to the Conductoid and it hit him he was defeated.

Prem wrote:IC: I (as Rath) said,"HEY DUOTRIX CANNOT YOU GIVE ME THE RIGHT ALIEN ? AND YOU DARK FOUR ARMS, I AM GONNA CRUSH AND SMASH YOU. KARRR..........". I started fighting with Tetramand. He was more stronger than me. I went more crazy and angry. I started punching and kicking him, he was defeated. Now a Dark Cerebrocustator, it was a IQ match. I turned into Grey Matter and started asking question that tell the names of special aliens from andromeda galaxy ? he answered, Orishan, Talpaedan, Geocelen Aerio, Prypiasian- b, Amperi. Who is predator of galvans? he asked. i said omniversius. i asked which species is smart ? he answered cerebrocustrtors. He was defeated because he gave a incomplete answer the answer was cerebrocustrator and galvan. now a dark conductoid. there was electricity flying everywhere he absorbs it and attacks me. i change into Chromastone and absorb it and fire he too absorbed it and other electricity and fired that time change to Diamondhead give back to the conductoid and it hit him he was defeated.

Prem wrote:I will correct the mistakes afterwards.

OOC: Mistakes corrected